Week #133 - The Gods of Thunderdome
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God 1: 12 And these he offered to the Secondborn, patron of betrayer and betrayed,
13 For so often does the betrayer think himself betrayed.
14 Before him appeared the god, as a bronze lion with two heads,
15 ...
16 ... [and] bearing the arms of man. \"Secondborn,
17 I seek vengeance,\" he spoke, and was touched by the god\'s brand,
18 Such that he could not die until avenged, or struck down
19 By the hand of his betrayer. ...

God 2: In the beginning, there was already Aloha. In the now, there is still Aloha and he still just wants you to be cool to one another, to be good to the land, to be supportive of local music, etc. He\'s not technically the god of surfing or adventure (he\'s more a god of good times, peace, and love) but doing some sick shit on a surfboard is certainly one way of gaining his favor.

A night in the gods' city
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