Week #152 - Rhymes with Red, White, and Blue
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This story was critiqued by:
Sitting Here (crit)
SkaAndScreenplays (crit)

Voidmart department: Nutrition Supplements and Organic Body Products

Flash Rule #1: Honour Phil Walsh's memory by working Aussie Rules footy into your story somehow.

Flash Rule #2: You don't believe in the Holistic bullshit that your department shills - so you've been swapping the contents of the 'home remedies' with pharmaceuticals and some of the stranger plants from the garden center.

Flash Rule #3: I deserve a discount!!!


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