Week #18 - TWO MEN ENTER, ONE MAN LEAVES
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Brawl prompt: Three Nantucket men in a fishing trawler. One of them is having an affair with another's wife. Something unexpected happens.

Round 1: sentientcarbon is an illiterate, noodle-armed, premature whippersnapper because there should be a comma in their statement located before and a semi-colon located after my name
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