Week #239 - Stop trying to crit me and crit me!
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This story was critiqued by:
BeefSupreme (crit)
Chili (crit)
sebmojo (crit)

Classic fight:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ds_-Gbs88eI

Flash rule: Your story must include a volleyball net.

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