Week #239 - Stop trying to crit me and crit me!
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This story was critiqued by:
BeefSupreme (crit)
Chili (crit)
sebmojo (crit)

Flash rule: “If ignorant both of your enemy and yourself, you are certain to be in peril.” -- Sun Tzu

Piss and Vinegar

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