Week #370 - Seeing the wiring beneath the board
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Flash rule #1: Everyone in your story is balancing on one leg. No one mentions this or finds it peculiar in any way.

Flash rule #2: Your story revolves, like a cog or gear.

Flash rule #3: Your story is set in the mesosphere.

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