Week #431 - Canterbury Tales: Blood Throne Edition
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Maugrim (crit)

Grandma Party, the Finicky Host
Lion Pitcher: One of the main characters in your story is obsessed with getting another specific person to take a bath (+300)
* Monday's spooky castle: HAUNTED and developed an AVERSION to wells and an AFFINITY for being thrown
* Tuesday's terrible inn: DRUNK, now singing "A dizzy twister dance, can't find my drink or man / Where are my keys? I lost my phone, phone"
* Wednesday's treasure hunt: You searched under this weird tile that looks like an awkward way to wake up your guests?? (+50)
* Surprise fairy attack: Picky Blackheart demands BLACK
* Thursday's Encounter: the HIEROPHANT: Spiritual wisdom, religious beliefs, conformity, tradition, institutions / Personal beliefs, freedom, challenging the status quo
* Limerick: Entered (+50)
Began with 1500 words. Currently has 1900 words

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