Week #431 - Canterbury Tales: Blood Throne Edition
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This story was critiqued by:
Maugrim (crit)
Yoruichi (crit)

Sebmojo, the Faded Squire
Confusing Horse: There is something in your story that no one understands, but people keep trying to use it anyway. (+300)
*Monday's spooky castle: ABSENT
*Tuesday's terrible inn: ABSENT
* Wednesday's treasure hunt: You searched under this weird tile that looks like two serfs unwillingly fighting each other with paper shields and t-squares?? (+50)
* Surprise fairy attack: Dwindledum Bowtie demands RED
* Thursday's Encounter: the WHEEL OF FORTUNE: Good luck, karma, life cycles, destiny, a turning point / Bad luck, resistance to change, breaking cycles
* Friday's Card Game: Queen of Diamonds (+100)
Began with 1300 words. Currently has 1750 words.

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