Week #471 - They called it... Judgment Dome...
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There was once a land of sand, and sand, sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand sand

He was a beautiful planet. He had a strange name, and he was a very big boy indeed.

Special Transaction: (+150 words from selling 6 sand to curling iron)

The forces are perfectly simultaneous, and there for the same reason
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