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Critiques for Week #454

The Great Goon Walkabout

brotherly
crabrock
   
Yoruichi
   
tuyop
crabrock
   
Yoruichi
   
Azza Bamboo
crabrock
   
Yoruichi
   
a friendly penguin
crabrock
   
Yoruichi
   
flerp
crabrock
   
Yoruichi
   
sebmojo
crabrock
   
Yoruichi
   
Noah
crabrock
   
Yoruichi
   
Thranguy
crabrock
   
Yoruichi
   
Sitting Here
crabrock
   
Yoruichi