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Critiques for Week #578

Forces of Nature Personified

beep-beep car is go
BaldDwarfOnPCP
   
Beezus
   
derp
   
The Cut of Your Jib
BaldDwarfOnPCP
   
Beezus
   
derp
   
rivetz
BaldDwarfOnPCP
   
Beezus
   
derp
   
Fat Jesus
BaldDwarfOnPCP
   
Beezus
   
derp
   
Thranguy
BaldDwarfOnPCP
   
Beezus
   
derp
   
Ouzo Maki
BaldDwarfOnPCP
   
Beezus
   
derp